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发表于 2008-1-12 07:53  资料 短消息 
呜呜呜!这不是欺负人嘛!欺负我看不懂!
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发表于 2008-1-12 10:33  资料 短消息 
给一些私人意见, 希望不要介意, 大家一起学习....

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原帖由 雪梅 于 2008-1-8 13:30 发表
i believe you are a best student !

a 和 best 不能连在一起...,

可以改成以下:
I believe you are the best

I believe you are a good student
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发表于 2008-1-14 08:59  资料 文集 短消息 
邂逅,英文改好了,请问你有email吗?我scan了,但我传我上来(功夫不到家),我email给你,然后你替我们传上,好吗?
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发表于 2008-1-14 23:07  资料 文集 短消息 
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若因某种原因而上传失败, 那么如何电邮给你? 有电邮吗?

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发表于 2008-1-15 19:24  资料 主页 个人空间 短消息  QQ
Thanks for dthc1977!

Thanks for your correct!

                                                               Never give up trying
Nobody can promise  that he or she will not encounter any problems in his or her life. Sometimes we want to give up trying when we encounter a difficult question, a task or even house work . If we give up then, what is going to happen? Yes, you will not finish all the things you must finish, and never become successful.
Most of us want to give up something which is very difficult, but before you give up trying please tell yourself:”I can do it, I can finish this task completely and perfectly.”And please do not give up trying before you want to give up.
When we are studying, please never give up trying you may not know how to solve the question now. To be a student, especially a student who is studying in Junior high or Senior high and your achievement is not very good,  you must know all the problems in yourself and try to make yourself better, but not always give up chances which can help you improve yourself.
If you want to have sufficient  skills and knowledge , please NEVER GIVE UP TRYING in your daily life and catch all the chances you can catch , this is a simple phrase  that will make you stronger in your study and make yourself shine in your class .
I am in Singapore now, and perhaps my English is not very good, but I never give anychance to improve my English. I can listen to BBC radio, and read newspapers when I am free. I can find what I need from newspapers—more news, more vocabulary, and how to write a good composition without grammatical mistakes.


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QUOTE:
原帖由 dthc1977 于 2008-1-14 08:59 发表
邂逅,英文改好了,请问你有email吗?我scan了,但我传我上来(功夫不到家),我email给你,然后你替我们传上,好吗?

Thank you very much!

My son had revise his composition.

I think This way is good for him to improve his English.

I'll encourage him to write more compositions here.

Hope you notice it all the time.

Thank you once again!
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发表于 2008-1-17 11:04  资料 文集 短消息 
邂逅的英语也不赖呀,一定是努力过。
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发表于 2008-1-21 12:06  资料 文集 短消息 
邂逅,
还有英文要改吗?我还是会把亲笔改的email给你的,这样你就会看得清楚那里被改了。
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没有人?我等到花儿也谢了。
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发表于 2008-1-25 18:30  资料 个人空间 短消息 
你帮我用英语写一篇介绍中国的文章。用中文表述是很容易的事,但用英文我想了很久也说不清楚。真是掉链子。我先抛砖引玉了。

China has ninty-sixteen billion kilonerers square of land. and has fifty-six nations(races),  the different nation own different custom.
It has five thousands years history.  
It has four distinct seasons. the different scenery in each season.
The capital of china is Beijing. Beijing is a heart city of political, cultural and economic in the China.

我很想把三山五岳,长江黄河,等优美的词加在里面,但那些用英文该怎么写啊。。

小学生都会的东西,我写不出来。。
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发表于 2008-1-26 10:42  资料 文集 短消息 
沧桑呀,谢谢你的捧场。
我想你先用中文写出来,然后我用我蜇脚的英语念给我同事然他翻译,好吗?
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在催你呢,沧桑,让我有点事儿干吧!
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发表于 2008-2-4 09:33  资料 个人空间 短消息 

Recently, I need to find a book for my English class at the library, but I don't know if the library have it in their collection. So I went to the library Webside and searched for the book online. I can search the library database  by subject, title, and author. From the library Webside, I found out that the book is currently available.
I went to the library and started finding from the  shelves, using a library catalog number. After that ,I went to the circulation desk and checked the book out using my library ID card.
In Singapore, anyone with a library ID card,  can borrow four books for up to 14 days, after which you can renew them if you still want to hang on to them. If you return them after they are overdued ,  you have to pay a fine. If you lose a book,  you will have to pay for the lost to have it replaced.
Books are  expensive ! Hence, I visit the library oftenly to read and borrow book instead of  buying them . Borrowing books can indeed save you money in the long run!  





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嗨, 邂逅 请看改了的卷子


附件: [该了的卷子] 20080204141942377.pdf (2008-2-4 14:27, 62.64 K)
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让我来帮帮您吧!

Recently I needed to find a book for my english class at the library, but I had no knowledge of whether the library had this
book i wanted in their collection. So I went to the library's website to search for the book online. I can search books througheither its subject, title or the name of the author. Fortunately, I found the book and it was not borrowed yet.

I went to the library the next day and found it through the shelves through  using the library catalog number. I went to
the circulation desk and checked the book out using my library ID card.

In the small yet vibrant island of Singapore,  if you have a library ID card, you can check out four books for up to 14 days, and you can renew them if you still want to hang on to them. If you return them after that , then they are considered
overdue, and you have to pay a late fee. If you lose a book, then you have to pay the money which would be used to
replace it.

Books are so costly and high-priced in Singapore. Unwilling to part with my valuable money, I often borrow books from
the library, and borrowing definitely could save money for you in the long run!




人不老心老的青年
http://www.sgwritings.com/7052

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Thank you very much!
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Thank you very much!
You are so friendly!: ,I am moved!

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In my case,I agree with your correction.
It is  too difficult for 邂逅!
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I think your correction is more suitable for 邂逅
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很深奥的英文,这日盛不是老师,应该是教授吧。
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