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发表于 2007-12-27 16:18  资料 文集 短消息 
改英文作文

假如有人要改英文作文,请把它放上来,我会打印出来,然后交给我老外同事改,改好了我会用相机拍下然后上传回来这里(不过lead time会多长我不能肯定) 。我是无事找事做,未能尽善处请见谅.
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发表于 2007-12-27 17:11  资料 个人空间 短消息 
thanks a lot,,,

i will write down somthing in English tomorrow,,,




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发表于 2007-12-27 17:35  资料 文集 短消息 
Yes, as long as I can help.
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发表于 2007-12-29 09:36  资料 文集 短消息 
随时有人写了上来我就随时让我同事给改,我想一起学,一起快乐。

小时候听过这首歌吗?

当我们同在一起
作词:李岩修
作曲:徐嘉良

当我们同在一起
在一起 在一起
当我们同在一起
齐快乐无比
你对着我笑嘻嘻
我对着你笑哈哈
当我们同在一起
齐快乐无比
当我们同在一起
在一起 在一起
当我们同在一起
齐快乐无比
你对着我笑嘻嘻
我对着你笑哈哈
当我们同在一起
当我们同在一起
当我们同在一起
在一起 在一起
当我们同在一起
齐快乐无比
你对着我笑嘻嘻
我对着你笑哈哈
当我们同在一起
齐快乐无比
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发表于 2008-1-1 17:45  资料 文集 短消息 
孩子的作文也行,照片不能上传就用抄啦,不难的
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发表于 2008-1-7 17:15  资料 个人空间 短消息 
主意好啊,,,支持一个
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发表于 2008-1-7 17:29  资料 文集 短消息 
大家可别客气,放马过来呀!(嘎嘎,让我这老虎吃掉吧。)
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Never give up trying
Nobody can promise he or she will not encounter any problem in his or her life. Sometimes we want to give up our trying when we encounter a difficult question, a task or even house work . If we give up them, what is going to happen? Yes, you will not finish all the things you must finish, and never come to successful.
  Most of us want to give up something which is very difficult, but before you give up your trying please tell yourself:”I can do it, I can finish this task completely and perfectly.”And please not give up your trying before you want to give up.
  When we are studying, please never give up your trying or always do not know how to solve the question which you do not know how to solve it now. To be a student, especially a student who is studying in Junior high or Senior high or your achievement is not very good, must know all the problem in yourself and try to make yourself better, but not always give up chances which can help you improve yourself.
  If you want to have sufficient  skills and knowledge please NEVER GIVE UP TRYING in your daily life and catch all the chances you can catch it, this is simple phrase will make you stronger in your study and make yourself shining in your class .
  I am in Singapore now, perhaps my English is not very good, but I never give up all the chances can improve my English. I can listen to BBC radio, read news paper when I am free. I can find what I need from news paper—more news, more vocabulary, and how to write a good composition without grammar mistakes.
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发表于 2008-1-8 09:02  资料 文集 短消息 
Thank you for your encouragement,  but I need to read your article word by word as my English is very poor.

谢谢你的鼓励,我晚些时候再试,再不能上载的话我不会放弃的,最多把这电脑给砸了,哈哈。

I have printed out your article and will pass to my Ang Moh colleague, I believe your grammars are correct.  May I know if you are a student of Junior College? You have a positive thinking and are willing to share with us your opinions and that make us really proud of you.
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发表于 2008-1-8 12:31  资料 个人空间 短消息 
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Thanks for you! That is my son's article ,he is a student for sec 1 ,we came here four months。
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发表于 2008-1-8 12:48  资料 个人空间 短消息 
Your son's English has improved a lot ,congratulating~~~~~~~~~`




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Your son in secondary one? Must be in a famous school, because my daughter is in Secondary 1 too but her English is not as good as yours.
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Thanks for your encourage!I will make my English better and better!
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i believe you are a best student !




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Hello,I am this composition's writer. Thanks for your praise.I am going to enter Sec 1 and I have pass a school's placement examination,I will have a chance to have a interview tomorrow.I will always catch all the chances which can help me improve my English beter,and never give up.

  thaks for your admiration again.
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Thank you very much!
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i believe,,you are able to pass the interview tomorrow,,




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Your composition seems good and I have passed to my colleague for checking,  I have asked her to take her time to check through it.  Once available I will post it out for you.  It will be a good start in this way for all of us to get to know whether our English have any grammar errors.

By the way, just to let you know my USA colleague's daughter was downgraded 3 years and
today is her second day in school and in class primary 4.  It is too bad for her, she has passed the PACT but her maths was not so good, so her Pact can be considered useless and wasted SGD500.00.

You have to study hard in order not to disappointing your parents.
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when i free, i will write some  article with english,  but enve i'am not a  student in secondary one. maybe is tomorrow, maybe is after tomorrow, maybe is ,,,,,,,,
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Hello,I am this composition's writer. Thanks for your praise.I am going to enter Sec 1 and I have pass a school's placement examination,I will have a chance to have a interview tomorrow.I will al ...

you are a good boy i know!
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